Romance

Baby, I'm not finished by xoxluurve

Maybe my eyes were directed at him too intently. But I wasn't stalking. Really. He didn't seem to agree with me.

Status: Complete

Baby, I'm not finished by xoxlurve is mind-blowing. I was gripped from the very start. The vast amount of sexual tension throughout keeps pulling you in. You'll keep reading and reading and reading, until, by the time you've reached the end, you've realised you'd never actually got to see them kiss!

I rarely cry when reading a story, but this one was so sad and so well written, it had me in tears in some places. And the sheer joy and happiness when I read the line "Baby, I'm not finished" in the actual story is indescribable. I can honestly say the ending is not what is expected at all! Why? Well you'll see for yourself. Please note that the epilogue takes place in an undefined time before the previous chapter.

Baby, I'm not finished  starts with  the main guy (Oliver) staring at the main girl (Sydney) when their two rival schools meet for a game. After an amusing scene in the library, quite some time after the prologue, Sydney goes home to discover he's her new stepbrother. Ensue chaos.

- Karla